At times, it felt like certain parts of the story were cheap shots to get a laugh. Other times, something was so out of the ordinary that it seemed calculated purely to grab attention. Some scenes seemed rushed and not well explained, as if their whole purpose was for shock value.
Oh, and as an aside, I’ve put a little response button at the bottom of the post. If you wouldn’t mind clicking “I have read this post” after you read it, I would greatly appreciate it! That way I can just get an idea of which of my posts are being read. I stole… ahem… borrowed this idea from another blogger, so thanks to Squeaks at the Hidden Doorways blog.